Monday, 6 February 2012

A Tale of Two Stories

Here are two stories that Enoch wrote during Language Arts and brought home from school this week (spelling is his):

Story 1:
Ther onec lived a planet. It looked like a monster.  But it wasint.  It shoots comits.  It hit an orange planet.  It was damiged.  It was a war.  And they lived happily ever after.  The end.

Story 2:
There onec lived a girl named Freya.  She found a big egg.  She saw it crack.  She yeled MoM.  Mom came and looked at the egg.  I cracked open!  Inside was a t-rex.  They toock him home and named him bitter.  And they lived haply ever after.  The end.

I love these little glimpses into what is in his head. 

1 comment:

Janet said...

Such a positive guy. Good plot development--named characters, a setting, a problem, and a solution. I'm glad everyone lives happily ever after despite the difficulties.